Analysis of Storyline
As part of my research, my partner and I asked several people their options on the storyline for our trailer. These are quotes from what people had to comment about the trailer. We received mixed feedback for our Storyline:
Title: The Innocent
“I like how the title contradicts itself. It’s a horror but the title makes you ask questions.”
“It’s Good, you get the feeling that it’s not going to be innocent.”
“I like the title, it makes it sound creepy!”
“It’s a blunt title, but gets you thinking!”
The Character: Pale young girl with long dark hair, dressed in a simple white dress.
“Stereotypical horror film character”
“The character portrays the title.”
It fits the title, the white dress shows innocence and the pale face shows ghost-like characteristics”
“The idea of her being young shows innocence and makes the film creepier”
Sounds effects: We haven’t included a lot of dialogue in out trailer, it mostly heavy breathing and screaming along with a background sound of a girl singing.
“I like how there is no dialogue, its creepier as we aren’t told what is going on. It makes me want to go and watch the film because I want to see what happens.”
“I think that the heavy breathing and screaming makes it’s more scary and makes me ask questions.”
“That would be really creepy. It sets you but because you want to know what happens next.”
“The child singing is a great idea, its portrays innocence.”
The storyline: The trailer is set in the Park: a ghostly young girl has haunted the forest for many years. This innocent girl kills any one who crosses her path.
“Its sounds believable as a horror.”
“The setting and the storyline both fit the category of a horror/ thriller genre film. I like how the storyline line in very vague makes me what to watch it to find out what happens.”
“ The setting is good as the park seems like an isolated with lots of trees, its a great place to film a horror.”
It makes me think why is she there? And why does she want to kill?”
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